雅思技巧:怎样增加雅思写作文章的表现力 一、避免使用语意弱的“be”动词。 1、把句中的表语转换为不同的修饰语。 这个技巧并不是那么容易掌握,但是确实是一个能够提高雅思写组成绩的非常实用的技巧。 例如: Weak:The trees are bare. The grass is brown. The landscape seems drab. Revision:The brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape. (转换为前置定语) Or:The landscape, bare and brown, begged for spring green. (转换为并列结构作后置定语) 2、将作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词。 例如: 1) Weak:The team members are good players. Revision:The team members play well. 2) Weak:One worker's plan is the elimination of tardiness. Revision:One worker's plan eliminates tardiness. 3、在以“here”或“there”开头的句子中,把“be”动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语。 例如: 1) Weak:There is no opportunity for promotion. Revision:No opportunity for promotion exists. 2) Weak:Here are the books you ordered. Revision:The books you ordered have arrived. 二、多用语意具体的动词,保持句意简洁明了。 这样的具体描写可以让文章看起来更具说服力,当然也就可以提高雅思写作成绩了。 例如: 1、Poor:My supervisor went past my desk. Better:My supervisor sauntered (=walked slowly) past my desk. 2、Poor:She is a careful shopper. Better:She compares prices and quality. 三、尽量运用主动语态。 之所以要这样做,是因为很多人不明白什么时候该用主动,什么时候该用被动。用错了,当然也就谈不上提高雅思写作成绩了。