对于很多考生而言, 雅思写作很难突破,还总能陷入低分困境。很多考生都会强调自己单词,句型,模板背的要多熟有多熟,但就是得不了。 选择恰当的语法结构。 很多考生在进行雅思写作的时候,总偏爱用几种句型替换写,而不在乎是不是合适的。 因此选择合适的语法结构可以使句子意思的表达更为和简练。以下是在考虑选择何种语法结构时可以参考的原则。 1.在雅思写作中,一个句子的主语和谓语动词应该能够反映句子中的较重要的意思。例如: The situation that resulted in my grandfather's not being able to study engineering was that his father needed help on the farm. 从意思上来分析,上面这句话需要表达的重要的概念是“grandfather's not being able to study”. 在表达这个概念时,原句用的主语是situation,谓语动词是was,不能强调需要表达的重点概念,可以改为下面这句话: My grandfather couldn't study engineering because his father needed help on the farm. 2.在雅思写作中,避免频繁使用“there be”结构。 例如:There were 25 cows on the farm that my grandfather had to milk every day. It was hard work for my grandfather. 可以改为: My grandfather worked hard. He had to milk 25 cows on the farm every day. 更简洁的句式为: My grandfather worked hard milking 25 cows daily. 3.在雅思写作中,把从句改为短语或单词。 例如:Dairy cows were raised on the farm, which was located100 kilometers from the nearest university and was in an area that was remote. 简洁的表达方式为: The dairy farm was located in a remote area, 100 kilometers to the nearest university. 4.在雅思写作中,仅在需要强调宾语而不是主语的时候,才使用被动语态。 例如:In the fall, not only did the cows have to be milked, but also the hay was mowed and stacked by my grandfather's family. 本句不够简洁的原因是本句的重心应该是“忙碌的家庭-my grandfather's family”. 而使用了被动语态后,仿佛重心变成了cows和hay,下面的表达方式是主动语态,相对来说更简洁一些: In the fall, my grandfather's family not only milked the cow but also mowed and stacked the hay.